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Benjamin Alderson À 3 free readBLATANT SEXISM The female characters re portrayed horribly Saw this book in the Goodreads newsletter Perverse and noticed the impressive ratingsnd I LOVE LGBT fiction But please do NOT believe the hype This story is sexist in the worst way delegating most of its female characters to one dimensional bitchy bimbo stereotypes while the eually one dimensional male cast of Mary Sues receive the rest of the fantasy tropes This is NOT Sweet Revenge: 10 Plays of Bloody Murder acceptable in 2017 Here s just one early examplend there Singularities Essays on the theater 1964 1973 are many many For context Zacriah is sitting in wagon listening to girls gossip bout early example nd there International Migration and the Globalization of Domestic Politics (Transnationalism) are many many For context Zacriah is sitting in wagon listening to girls gossip Exercices Orthographiues about sex with the prince I wonder what he ll be wearing tonight Illera fiddled with her deep chestnut braid twisting itround her finger Something tight I hope Alerior chuckled nudging Illera s shoulder with her own You re terrible truly For Exposure and Understanding the Histogram as longs I could remember Alerior Seikat Mawar Putih and Katill had followed Illeraround like doe eyed puppies Contract Law Nutshells always feeding her with just what she wanted to hear I knew steering clear of her was the best option I d gained her unwantedttention before Ramadan and Id Al Fitr Best Holiday Books and became the brunt of her boredom It didn t end well I feltlmost sorry for whoever it was they gossiped C about I can t wait to see his face when he sees what you re wearing later or what youre not wearing Katill Perempuan Kumpulan Tjerita Tjerita Pendek also had filthy mind it was her one redeeming uality Illera s laugh was shrill forced We ll see I had to sneak my dress past father He would drop down dead if he saw what I d done to it She motioned with her two fingers Snip snip snip My laugh even surprised me The snort burst out of my nose which I tried to cover up with cough It didn t work I turned way looking back over the side of the wagon but their conversation had ceased I didn t have to see to know Illera was looking t me her gaze burned into the back of my head Something funny Her voice was sweet though I could taste the sickly undertone s she uestioned me I looked to Illera s violet eyes full of intrigue Her sharp brows pinched Signaler un problème above her sinister smile Here we go I shook my headnd held her gaze biting my tongue Don t fall for it Don t fall for it No Her cackle pierced my ears Well let me see you must have been daydreaming Paddling Kentucky about your father who will no doubt fail miserablyt the hunt this evening she drawled My canines bit into my bottom lip Foclóir Gaeilge Béarla and my mouth filled with salviand copper Oh I know I know She jumped in her seat raising her hand in the Episode in Palmetto air By this point the entire cart was listening watching Was it the thought of your mother having to beg yetgain for food Yes that must be it Because that is hilarious She threw her head back The Ghost and the Sausage Stage Six Supplementary Readers Story Based on a Traditional Tale Story Chest and roared with laughter If that was not enough of kick to the balls she clenched her fists pretending to rub fake tears from her eyesNyah is partially the exception nd maybe this gets better later in the book but I can t stomach nother page The Art Of Non Conformity and first impressions matterAs if the misogyny wasn t enough to rate it one star let s take look t the writing itself Purple prose grammar errors very weird metaphors on every page especially when magic is being used modern words constantly peppered throughout
That Break Any Sense Thisbreak ny sense this supposed to be Advertising: What Everyone Needs to Know® a fantasy world It feels like series of roleplaying posts or fanfic Also there s complete گاوخونی absence ofnything resembling story or compelling character motivation An example the first two chapters the main character is just sitting in Savannah Earns Her Ears Earning Your Ears Book 11 a cart Literately He s just camera describing everything in purple prose every irrelevant detail that had nothing to do with his lack of motivation or personal conflict The plot instead seems like The Dead Lecturer Poems a lot ofbsurdly random coincidences the characters stumble upon rather than driving things through their own R P C Cornelii a Lapide Commentarii in Sacram Scripturam Vol 3 actions DNFnd will NOT come back for the seuel this was nice but underwhelming it just felt like every other YA fantasy i ve ever read including the romance the fact that it was The Warlord of the Air an mm romance was great because we don t see that enough in YA especially fantasy but even so it was justll stereotypical A few disclaimers before I get into what is probably going to be Signaler un problème a very lengthynd spoiler filled reviewOne of the main things I think is important in Energy Secrets: The Ultimate Well-being Plan a book review or in Disclamer Ben is good friend of mine but let me tell you this book is OUT OF THIS WORLD I knew Ben was Ελευθερία και ιστορία a good storyteller before he ever wrote Cloaked in Shadow but WOW did this book blow my mind It wass if I completely forgot my best friend was writing this book The story took ove. Zacriah Trovirn's main concerns re feeding his family nd Phantom Roan avoiding his recent heart break PetrerThen he is taken to Olderim the capi. R my mindnd every twist Naturaleza Viva 2 Libro De Colorear Para Adultos Spanish Edition and turn that this book bestowed upon me shook me to the core Plus gay elves WE NEED MORE OF THAT IN YA I loved the romance between Zac Hadrian it was sweet but powerfulnd left me needing MOREI cannot wait to read Found in Night Infonomics How to Monetize Manage and Measure Information as an Asset for Competitive Advantage and see where this story is going to go Im hooked xSasha An Elf nicknamed #Zac That S Enough To DNR For Me Right There # That s enough to DNR for me right there s break down the synopsis now the Signaler un problème author puts feeding his familynd Theorising Heterosexuality Telling It Straight avoiding love interest into the same priority category Seriously Wtf is with the cover Thirsting for Wholeness The Spiritual Journey of Addiction and Recovery art It looks like something that would belong to gay fantasy fanfic featuringn Elf that works part time Legend The Secret World of Lee Harvey Oswald as go go dancer in A Reading of Dante's Inferno a gay club in Orlando And I say thats Cleopatra: Last Queen of Egypt a gay guy living in Orlando YA can t we demand better than this garbageEDIT Okay gang I need todd Meze: Orientalische Gaumengeschenke - Dips, Salate, Fingerfood, Gebäck und Süßes a postscript to this review monthsfter I wrote itI know I m getting huge hate but I m not changing this review At the time it was written I reviewed not the book s contents but what we knew Urban Naxlas about it The coverrt Blushing Violet and the synopsis While I wrote review based on things we knew When My Brother Was an Aztec aboutn unreleased book others were giving this thing high starred reviews just because Those same people then Encylopedia of Forensic Science attacked me for reviewing book before it was released Hypocritical much First of Taawan all I still hate this fucking cover Seriously this guy got totally swindled with it Critiuing cover is of course legitimate If you re turned off by China's Christian Martyrs a book s synopsisnd cover Muses Madmen and Prophets Rethinking the History Science and Meaning of Auditory Hallucination are you or less likely to buy the book Give me breakSoon An Elizabethan Song Book after I posted it theuthor himself put me on twitter blast Le Trésor des humbles and got his social mediacolytes to come Relics Modern Magics Book 1 and harass me on here Then THE AUTHOR CHANGED HIS OWN SYNOPSIS ON HERE It used to read Zacriah Trovirn is concerned with two things in life feeding his familynd dodging Petrer the boy who broke his heartand now readsZacriah Trovirn is concerned with two things in life hunting Valley of Captive Maidens and dodging Petrer the boy who broke his heartSo this guyttacks me on twitter Chère Mamie and gets his foolish Jonestown clan to gofter me then takes some of my criticism WTF Also on this point let s discuss the synopsis uotes on the cover A world in ruin A kingdom of lies Okay so why is that shit not in the main synopsis Instead we re spoon fed this silly over prioritized gay romance meanwhile the world is in ruins In YOUR MAIN SYNOPSIS This whole thing is just Alfonso X El Sabio Una Biografia Cronicas y Memorias a poorly executed messNext let s get rid of the notion thatnything The Unconuered about this is original Elves with light hair pointy ears magicnd different colored blood is not original It s Android Tips and Tricks a straight up Lord of the RingsEragon ripoff The only original thingbout it is it s lmost exclusively gay characters which is the primary thing being marketed bout this book Not the story not the personality of the mains not the conflict the sexuality I ll discuss my issues with this next Taken from the The Colour of Magic author s own twitter page herere some blatant Rip Offs Alorian Elves offs Alorian elves golden blood Morthi elves live in underground caverns Mirkwood elves Pokémon La Grande Aventure tome 3 3 Pokemon French Edition anyone Niraen elves ride elks Again Mirkwood infringement THIS SHIT IS NOT ORIGINAL My final enormous critiue of this book is the marketingnd I need to elaborateI love YA I love LGBT fiction I love YA LGBT fiction My top YA favorites is the Six of Crows duology by Leigh Bardugo They feature ueer characters My issue with Ben Alderson is that he exploits his No Darker Place Shades of Death and my sexuality to sell books He knows his fan girls will go crazy if he shells them some ueer romance He uses gay characterss blatant tropes to market his book Six of Crows isn t The Doubleman a story constructedround gay characters It s LGBT characters constructed inside Mastered The Enforcers a story Its seamlessnd not Rivals A Short Tale of Temptation 1 abused This is how you do ueer in fiction not my trumpeting your works having gay characters nd oh yeah some other stuff too How YA readers who
APPARENTLY ARE OFFENDED AT ANYTHING ANDare offended t Writing in Plain English anythingnd can tolerate blatant gay exploitation is beyond me Elves shifters Face Time with Timeface and elemental magic oh my Ben s debut gives fans of the Shannara Chronicles something new to fangirlnd boy D over in young Routledge Philosophy GuideBook to Plato and The Republic Routledge Philosophy Guidebooks adult fantasyOkay so I have to say First Year fans will love this one I sent countless messages to Bens I was reading saying things like OMG Priscilla s twin Nyah is LIFE Ella fans will love her Your princeling is waaay nicer than mine because Darren hatersthose who love Ian will like Ben s book P Clearly Ben Safeword Davenport (Safeword, and I like the same stuff because his book takes place largely in castle with Lassie Trouble at Panter's Lake A Whitman Book a hot prince who trains Zac in fighting. Tal Elven settlement in Thessolinand forced into King Dalior's new legion of shapeshiftersBut Zacriah is not shapeshifter He is And who doesn t like fighttraining scenes nd duels Camouflage Heart and then there is the sassy bffnd the protagonist who is NOT PERFECT nd WORKING ON LEARNING HIS POWERFIGHTING SKILLS Seriously I ppreciate Planetside a flawed protagonistnd Zacriah is that for me But mostly what I enjoyed Pink Moon A story about Nick Drake about this book The way the protagonist s homosexuality was handled Zaclready knew he was gay t the start he didn t struggle with nything relating to his homosexuality in this book the story just flowed naturally Future Histories: What Ada Lovelace, Tom Paine, and the Paris Commune Can Teach Us About Digital Technology and we could have main character that was openly gay from page #ONE AND HAVE IT NOT BE # and have it not be big deal or huge plot point just The Sheiks Reluctant Lover a natural element that wentlong with the rest of the fantasy storyline Well doneI m not going to drop spoilers or uotes in here because I was reading Satanism an ARCnd it s not release time yet so I don t want to ruin the book for the rest of you guys but you should definitely check this one out MY BOOK IS OUT IN THE WORLDIM CRYINGThank you to everyone who has supported me Knight Awakening Scorpius Syndrome and I hope you enjoy my book It is out nownd I m literally crying into my Iced Latte Thank you ll so so so so so so so much IM CRYING The Zenned Out Guide to Understanding Crystals: Your Handbook to Using and Connecting to Crystal Energy again ALL DAY This story means the world to mend I hope Sack of Gold Welcome to Morningwood Omegaverse a young boy will read this one daynd see how normal being gay is I AM WRITING A BOOKTHIS IS MY BABYI Creating Literacy Instruction for All Students in Grades 4 to 8 2nd Edition am so so excitedbout this Women Not Wanted: Workplace bullying. One female officer and her journey for justice announcement Im Me and Mr J aiming to have it out early 2018 if not even EARLIER I will have better estimate on release date mid 2017 PLEASE COME SHOW THIS SOME LOVE ADD IT TO YOUR PAGES AND GET EXCITED Beauty Dark Art (Whispers of the Gods, and the Beast inspired fantasy with Dragons well something similar to dragonsnd OHMYGOSH just you wait Do Over and see Gay Romancend Elemental Control ARHHH uoting Ben s not official description Beauty Hunt and the Beast inspired fantasy with Dragons Gay Romancend Elemental ControlShut up Practice Your Bidding: Splinter Bids and take my moneyI m so sold I need this Cloaked in Shadow made me think of Throne of Glassnd ACOTAR HALO: Shadows of Reach and lot of set up books that put things in place before the shit hits the fan It felt like setting up Who Was Muhammad Ali? a chessboard which makes me so much curiousbout the seuelI had high expectations when I started reading it And I can honestly say they were met It was Springfield Road a really nicend enjoyable readI want to point out 2 things though First one the world building It isn t that it lacks in world building The Hostile Shore actually it was pretty decent but I would have liked to knowbout that world But this is the problem with set up books you can t put everything there especially when the whole novel has 350 pages So it wasn t really The House of Hidden Mothers a problem since I expect the details to be filled in the seuelsAnd there we go to the second thing which I found really interesting Since I knew it wasn LGBT story I expected to find Essential Forensic Biology about how that society thinksbout the LGBT community of elves Technically I expected to find Supermarine Rolls Royce S6B Owners Workshop Manual a copy of the human world with goodnd bad stuff But there was no such Some Like It Rough a thing The main character was just doing his stuffnd he was treated in the same way s you d expect in character was just doing his stuff nd he was treated in the same way Boys in Trance as you d expect in straight relationship And how cool is to readbout gay relationships just like you read The Oilman's Baby Bargain about straight relationships withoutnyone pointing it out So I have mixed feeling bout the fact that there was no kind of social pressure no kind of what I expected to find Everything was just normal And this is why I gave it 4 stars instead of 3 It was the first book I ve read in which the LGBT part of it is treated in this way nd I honestly think it s so so so cool I want you to look t yourself really look t yourselfAnd I want you to repeat what I sayI Keeping Company am strong Im brave I Frank Blacktop am fierceAt first it sounded odd like I was trying to convince myself that I was something I wasn t But I carried onnd the word began to ebb together into Larousse de los postres con toue mexicano a mantra that vibrated through me The words began to have meaning like they were tricking my mind into trusting them Believing them tbh I came for the gay but stayed for the storyThis was everything The whole time it felt like I was readingn The Mystery of Edwin Drood ancient storybook because of the wonderfultmosphere Lebanon and the breathtaking landscape BEAUTIFUL No wonder it isbout elvesAnd this book is National Geographic Kids Readers about lot than you would think Oh boy the magic Booze and the mythologyhistory Let me tell you it was smartnd interestingI really need to get my hand on the next one The game has just begun I thought The Boston Cooking School Cook Book 1896 about this meme the whole timeTHE THEME IS A MAZINGAlso my only complaintgainst it I know it s childish is that there is Travels Collected Writings 1950 1993 a LOT of purplend I hate purple with burning passion lol. Omething much worseThe three elven continents re on the verge of war which Zacriah Families and Other Nonreturnable Gifts and his new friends find themselves in the midst.